玉兰

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>≈★流星★≈</i>在2007-3-21 23:25:00的发言：</b><br/>从今天开始看玉兰的作业(一直到不再需要用金山快译)[em07][em07][em07][em07][em07]</div><p>i will try to do my best to avoid making mistake,,,,,,,,,,,, </p><p>i am so afraid to show&nbsp; you my mistake,,,,,,,,,,, </p><p>when you see my homework ,you should have enough patience to&nbsp;bear with so many &nbsp;error,,,,,</p>[em04][em04]

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-22 13:41:11编辑过]

老鼠爱小米

<p>英文水平有限，就是你有错误我也不知道。</p><p>不过我觉得你的句子还可以更简略些，所以人家才讲你是中国式英语。</p>

玉兰

ok,,let me try......

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-22 16:06:44编辑过]

玉兰

<p><font face="宋体" size="3">22 Mar 2007</font><strong><br/><font face="宋体" size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face="宋体" size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Where Is God﹖</font></strong></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体" size="3">A couple had two little boys ages 8 and 10,?who were excessively mischievous. They were always getting into trouble and their parents knew that?if any mischief occurred in their town,?their sons were probably involved. <br/><br/>　　They boys' mother heard that a clergyman in town had been successful in disciplining children, so she asked if he would speak with her boys. The clergyman agreed but asked to see them individually. So the mother sent her 8-year-old first in the morning, with the older boy to see the clergyman in the afternoon. <br/><br/>　　The clergyman, a huge man with a booming voice,?sat the younger boy down and asked him sternly?″Where is God﹖″. <br/><br/>　　They boy's mouth dropped open,?but he made no response sitting there with his mouth hanging open,?wide-eyed. So the clergyman repeated the question in an even sterner tone ″Where is God﹖″ Again the boy made no attempt to answer. So the clergyman raised his voice even more and shook his finger in the boy's face and bellowed? ″WHERE IS GOD?﹖″ <br/>The boy screamed and bolted from the room,?ran directly home and dove into his closet,?slamming the door behind him. When his older brother found him in the closet he asked″What happened﹖″ <br/>The younger brother gasping for breath replied? ″We are in BIG trouble this time dude. God is missing - and they think WE did it?″</font></span></span></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-22 22:12:16编辑过]

玉兰

<p>23 Mar 2007 </p><p>&nbsp; There is a new student in our calss today ,she is from China and has been singapore nearly 6 years .She graduated Beijin traditional medicine university ,She had&nbsp;&nbsp;been a traditional chinese docter for 10 years&nbsp;in Beijin&nbsp;Anzhen&nbsp;hospital ,She also was a famous docter and &nbsp;had plenty experience in kidney system,now she also is a docter and is working in a tradional chinese clinic in Singapore &nbsp;,she is a acupuncture docter.</p><p>&nbsp;She is a part time student ,her age is as me,she is busy&nbsp;every day ,but she still persist in learning English. I am very respect&nbsp;her.</p>

天使900323

要回家转了哈！要过快乐幸福的日子了哈！[em07]

玉兰

yes,,,you are right![em05][em05]

mgmg77777

想到我们要分隔两地，对先生说：“我和孩子离开，你肯定会不习惯的！”，先生默认，答：“我多去看你们吧！”这样行吗？

mgmg77777

thanks! perhaps this is a challenge fou us, perhaps we may lose a lot of ,perhaps we will get a lot of also.my son is 13. I worry him unwell shoud there of study environnment.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-24 14:17:37编辑过]

玉兰

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>mgmg77777</i>在2007-3-24 13:47:00的发言：</b><br/>想到我们要分隔两地，对先生说：“我和孩子离开，你肯定会不习惯的！”，先生默认，答：“我多去看你们吧！”这样行吗？</div><p>if the sir&nbsp;/ lady &nbsp;is very young ,he/she &nbsp;might be incontrol,,,,if the sir/lady is older ,,,he/she might be controled by them.......</p><p>so ,in my opinion,,,your child should finish studying in elementary school in china,then he/she can come to Singapore ,,,it is a better way,,</p>