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hello_babe LV7

发表于 5-10-2004 20:10:16 | 显示全部楼层

<P>ok ok just to tease you~</P>[em05]

死珊珊 LV12

发表于 15-10-2004 00:52:03 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>木易馬枫</I>在2004-9-30 16:59:05的发言:</B>

<P>How should i start?</P>
<P>I broke up with my ex-bf because of my abroad study!</P>
<P>so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</P>[em19][em19][em19]</DIV>
<P>为舍么老是分居两弟就是分手的下场,这样的爱情也太脆弱了吧!不要也罢</P>

死珊珊 LV12

发表于 15-10-2004 00:55:20 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>davier</I>在2004-9-30 17:31:40的发言:</B>

<P>2nd poem by her</P>
<P>This one is written by her and not copied.</P>
<P align=center>I love my darling Davier, he is deep within my heart.</P>
<P align=center>I knew I wanted to be with him forever, right from the start.</P>
<P align=center>I love him very much and hope and hope that we'll bnever break apart.</P>
<P align=center>If we ever break apart;</P>
<P align=center>My heart will cry forever, I could never imagine my life without him. </P>
<P align=center>I need him now and forever, I have faith our love will prosper,</P>
<P align=center>and that we will endeavour not for just our time together,</P>
<P align=center>but for eternity and forever......</P></DIV>

誓言都是那么简单就讲出来..............

死珊珊 LV12

发表于 15-10-2004 00:57:33 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>davier</I>在2004-9-30 17:46:09的发言:</B>

<P>This is written by me 10 years ago when I was 13 or 14.</P>
<P align=center>The falling rain never seem to cease,</P>
<P align=center>and on my face the cold wind leaves a gentle kiss.</P>
<P align=center>Standing there I made up my mind,</P>
<P align=center>this Valentines' I will make her mine.</P>
<P align=center>I made my search and found her there,</P>
<P align=center>towards her was what I dare.</P>
<P align=center>Was it I or was it not,</P>
<P align=center>all I wanted was just a nod.</P>
<P align=center>With twelve roses and one true heart,</P>
<P align=center>that I've already done my part.</P>
<P align=center>And upon this ocming Valentines',</P>
<P align=center>wishing you might give some time.</P>
<P align=center>To tell how you've changed my life,</P>
<P align=center>and all this while I've never mind.</P>
<P align=center>But dreams and reality, they've never met,</P>
<P align=center>love was someting we could never have.</P>
<P align=center>And now my eyes, they're so despair,</P>
<P align=center>tthe love in them was no longer there.</P>
<P align=center>Now I know that its up to fate,</P>
<P align=center>how I wish it was never too late......</P></DIV>
<P>天哪,这么小就写出这么深情的东西,我13岁才要发育呢</P>

潘多拉外传 LV5

发表于 15-10-2004 12:03:17 | 显示全部楼层

English pls~

Nichollas LV8

发表于 18-10-2004 02:17:56 | 显示全部楼层

<P>hey <b><FONT color=#000066>死珊珊</FONT></b></P><P><b><FONT color=#000066>I fully agree with you. If someone who is only 13 or 14 years old can write such a long and impressive poem then i guess he must be a genius. </FONT></b></P><P><b><FONT color=#000066>Sorry for being too candid...</FONT></b></P>

hello_babe LV7

发表于 18-10-2004 12:00:40 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>Nichollas</I>在2004-10-18 2:17:56的发言:</B>

<P>hey <B><FONT color=#000066>死珊珊</FONT></B></P>
<P><B><FONT color=#000066>I fully agree with you. If someone who is only 13 or 14 years old can write such a long and impressive poem then i guess he must be a genius. </FONT></B></P>
<P><B><FONT color=#000066>Sorry for being too candid...</FONT></B></P></DIV>

It is possible if his English is strong. Anyway he is not from China.

hello_babe LV7

发表于 18-10-2004 17:20:39 | 显示全部楼层

你越怕被笑,越说不好!!!!

死珊珊 LV12

发表于 18-10-2004 16:20:36 | 显示全部楼层

我怕大家看了笑话,所有就不拿我的英文出来标榜了!

死珊珊 LV12

发表于 18-10-2004 16:17:01 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>hello_babe</I>在2004-10-18 12:00:40的发言:</B>


It is possible if his English is strong. Anyway he is not from China.</DIV>
<P>新加坡人..........唉.........他不是说他女朋友很聪明么,我看他女朋友16,17岁写的情书没也他13,14岁写的好!.............赫赫,果真是"天才"!</P>
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